“ Who You See ” ~ may not still be ~


The who you see

May not still be

The monolith

You surmised,

And begs perceive

The elapsed time

Ought not surprise,

That who you see

Be but an outer shell

Etched so by time,

Wouldst bare a man

Of plus score years

You thus now see,

Yet seems to hide

A real me inside,

The while who I am

Matters not a damn

Who I was then,

Should mirror now

The who you find to see!


80 thoughts on ““ Who You See ” ~ may not still be ~

  1. Nobody is crystal clear, it would be unsustainable. We must have a secret garden, and some are more secret than others.
    This poet must have a huge shalimar behind his scathing feather !

    • Alas my secret garden is not so secret anymore, for as time passes I realize sharing is far more rewarding, and so I write. As to my feather being scathing, I say at times rather sharp and cutting when acutely called for, but if memory serves never scathing, at least not consciously. Thank you for the comment that allows me to elaborate . Jean-Jacques Fournier

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