
Listen to audio But for a little humour...
Dreamscape
– of a risky nature –
Lapsed in dreamscape
Of rhythmic tossing,
By love’s enfoldment
Be aberrantly bound,
Beneath a quilt of pink
When aroused to a sound,
Of an angry voice on the brink
She reaches for her lacy things
As her fiancé hollers, you harlot
And repeatedly hammers in fury,
While lover holds a rumbling door shut!
based on and old familiar story, for a friend of errant ways... © Jean-Jacques Fournier Written in Sweetsburg
Short poem excerpt, of ov. Sounds - in an aberrant state - written in Grasse, Fr. 2006,... Imagery - private & public ... Music - excerpt of Jazz Mood - BMG Channel ... Audio – Jean-Jacques Fournier
That mesmerizing image and your beautiful words whisked me away.
Thank you, dear Paulette, for how so perfectly you express your appreciation of the delicate subject of dreams with a tongue in cheek with a slight humorous twist, which regardless of issue, humans have no control of dream outcome or direction. Ergo all serious aspects of life finds a comical side and vice versa. even this worn out old story, disguised as a poem, awake can bring a chuckle or a youthful smile, at any age. And if you’ve been around as long as I have, both come easily !
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Best to leave the subject of this dream safely in the dreamworld. 😉
You may be right, Liz. For the advantage of poetry, be so that with a little bit of abstraction, the reader can fill in whatever or wherever the story ought go. Be it safe, daring or damning! 😉