I sought living
Years the more,
Of them the sum
Secures encore,
For score or two
Not ne’er enough,
A pardon due
Leads me to plead,
Not waive the stuff
Of years one lived,
Chance be my best
Of time life gives,
When soon to rest
Hold years ahead,
Not played as test
For idling dead,
When all ‘tis left
Means but to pass
Expressly fast,
Begs added score
To get it right
Before the dark,
Be my eternal night!
Before the dark,
Be my eternal night!
Such beautiful words. A magnificent poem.
Thanks again for your kind words my dear friend… I’m just trying to get it right. Jean-Jacques
See correction of typo errors. Thanks. Jean-Jacques Fournier
“I sought living.” I think that is the essence/purpose of why we are here. So many times we are afraid to “really” live and accept a mediocre existence. We are meant to live boldly, fearlessly. To me that is what we are “seeking” and striving for – to give light within the time that we live, to share joy, sorrow, hope, compassion. Another wonderful post!
Thank you Rebecca. your kind of analytical responses the work are a banquet by which we scribblers are made feel worthy of persevering. More to the point, important feed for ever hungry poets. Thank you again dear friend. Jean-Jacques