“ Time Left Behind ” ~ in my young mind ~

Would that I’d find

Days once too long

In my young mind,

In endless ways

Chose to entreat,

Eager for morrows

Time be held brief,

The while brood then,

For long day’s end…

Save now I’ve grief

For time I left behind!

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2 thoughts on ““ Time Left Behind ” ~ in my young mind ~

    • Nice touch your use of triptych, to juxtaposition a three poems appearing in sequence that is making a point you describe. Add the aspect of youth mindset of hurry, fading to adulthood anxiously pining to slowing time down, and the whole says it all. Jean-Jacques Fournier

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